a short sharp shock
By amy ross. Filed in books, writing |Tags: authors, characterization, nabokov, novels, raymond carver, short stories, the mikado, writing
The Elegant Variation has an interesting guest post by Marisa Silver on the short story, and its merits relative to the longer fiction narrative.
I’ve been thinking about this a lot recently, as I’m finishing up one class on reading the short story and another on writing them.
I once counted myself among the people Silver describes – the short story haters. At the time, I had a lot of justifications for this position (short stories are unengaging? oblique? pretentious? I forget my specific grievances), but I’ve since concluded that I didn’t like the short story because I hadn’t read any good ones. Thankfully, I’ve been cured of that ailment.
Still, that’s not to say novels and short stories are the same, or give pleasure in the same ways. But what, precisely, is the difference?
One theory I’ve been playing with is that a (good) novel paints character so richly and distinctively, the reader feels as if he actually knows this person. The short story simply doesn’t have time to offer such a deep and thorough investigation of character, so it tends to rely on recognizable character “types” that are instantly grasped and intuitively understood. I don’t mean to suggest that short form writers rely on clichés or “stock” characters – rather that they make use of people who already feel familiar to the reader, because we run across them every day.
For example, even though it’s been years since I read Lolita, I still feel like I know Humbert Humbert as well as if he were an old school friend, or my next door neighbor growing up. (Erm… maybe I shouldn’t have gone there.) Whereas, even though I read What We Talk About When We Talk About Love a couple of weeks ago, I can’t name a single character in the collection – what I have instead is a vivid sense of the kind of people who inhabit Carver’s world. I don’t need to know every detail about his characters, because their situations – crumbling marriages, alcoholism, anger and hopelessness – are universal enough to be instantly understandable.
So, I don’t know about this theory. Maybe all I’ve really said is that Raymond Carver is not Nabokov, and Nabokov is not Carver. But as I work on writing and revising more shorts (and, of course, writing and revising novels), I find myself thinking about which characters belong in which medium.
Anyone else who has dabbled in both forms – have you found any other crucial differences between them? Or want to dispute this one?



Thursday, April 15th 2010 at 12:21 pm |
This is a really interesting perspective & I think you’ve nailed the reason I don’t like short stories very much. I’m VERY intrigued by odd & quirky characters and they don’t seen to turn up much in short stories. The reason makes a lot of sense.
Thursday, April 15th 2010 at 12:40 pm |
aw, that’s a shame… well, I hope one day you find the short story that has a sufficiently quirky character for you! What are your favorite novels/characters? Maybe I’ll be able to think of a corresponding short you would enjoy.
I’m reading George Saunders now, and there are definitely some odd, quirky types, there…
Sunday, April 18th 2010 at 9:34 am |
For me, I always find it harder to tell the difference, with contemporary short stories, between the ones that are really bad, and the ones I just didn’t understand. I think it helps, like you said, to read a lot of truly good short stories, and I should do that more.
Sunday, April 18th 2010 at 10:58 am |
Yeah, I dunno… It does seem like some writers use the short form as an excuse to be oblique and inaccessible. A little like poetry in that way… there are far too many aspiring poets who seem to think that the goal of poetry is to be incomprehensible. But that’s definitely not true of all of them, nor (in my opinion) of the best practitioners of either genre.
Wednesday, April 21st 2010 at 9:25 am |
Have you read any Deborah Eisenberg? Fantastic short stories, all the quirk anyone could ever want, yet not over-dense or inaccessible. To me, anyway. Love George Saunders, too.
Wednesday, April 21st 2010 at 11:52 am |
I don’t know Eisenberg! I’ll have to check her out, thanks.
Sunday, May 2nd 2010 at 7:13 pm |
i don’t love them either. i just. don’t.